AfroShine's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Now you're a hero]

yea

the song was hot, but the kick needs to be more pronounced, it's not deep and loud enough.

Reachground responds:

My mixing skills are horrible. I'd like to learn more but it's so boring!

[DbX - Repose]

I like this

If you don't know the best genre to put it in, you should put it in R&B. To me, I see it as experimental R&B. I think you should make the drums a little more pronounced. That's all I can think of right now, but if i listened to the song 5 times I could probably think of more advice.

P.S.
I'd appreciate it if you dropped a few reviews on my submissions, tanx.

Shamukh responds:

Not sure what you mean by pronounced, rofl. I guess I'll put this in r&b, I don't really think that's where it fits, but I'll take your word for it.

Thanks for the review man! I'll see to dropping you a review or two. :)

[Rig - Urban Rain]

hmm

doesn't sound urban enough. You need more car and truck sounds and maybe the sounds of a subway underneath you. Another thing would be maybe a mass of footsteps from pedestrians and the laughing or cursing of people because they were suddenly caught in a downpour lol. Also, the heavy drops needs to be fixed.

Rig responds:

Well, yeah. I only used sounds that were recorded in my apartment, though. It's not meant to be a TRUE representation of a downpour - it's more like an abstraction. :)

[[ f ] Hip Hop Loop 2]

ill give an 8

I can see 50 cent making up some shitty lyrics and making a music vid with girls shaking their asses to this, but it's repetitive and instead of just putting hip hop loop 2, give it a name something that you think would go with it, it gives the song some soul and if you have the right name, u could imagine it being sang in the song, such as my song, "Money in my Sock". You can imagine the words Money in my Sock being uttered as you listen to it. LOLZ

flashmac responds:

Haha 50 cent making some shitty lyrics. About the repetitiveness, I didn't know what else to put in it and that's why it's called hip hop loop 2 and not a real name so people know it's a loop and not a full repetitive song. But i do think Money in my Sock has a nice ring to it, haha.

[Lost.Love.(FMX)]

freshh

This is fresh man, but I'd say you could make it a lil longer and add a lot more substance to it, maybe 3 minutes with a few more instruments thrown in.

Flash-MX responds:

Hey thanks for the review! I woula've put the whole song up but its a little big for one upload; the song does continue with maybe on or two movements depends, I will try and add some new instruments though, a cello maybe?

Thanks again!

[Last Encore]

wow nice

Sounds great, very proffesional. This definitely would fit under R&B, it's more of a song that you would sing to then a song that you would spit to.

LastEncore responds:

Appreciate it.

[Ghostwave]

yessir

all I can say is you pwn the top songs of all time list.

NemesisTheory responds:

Haha, for now. People are drilling into the score as if their lives depended on it, hahahaha!

[Piano.Theme.Pt2]

this owns

You became one with your keyboard good work.

Flash-MX responds:

Haha thanks very much for the reviews! Ill check out some of your stuff,
peace

[mute: protest]

i think its iight but...

why do you say its from an old song? did you take from the idea of another song?

natur3 responds:

I didn't say its from an old song. It's a song my band and I wrote from a few years ago.

[HouseSquared]

iight

it was iight you know but it just didn't have an appeal to me, but well done.

loogiesquared responds:

~ty